Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
MysteryGuy9215
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not a bad story at all. I like the concept, although I have seen it quite a bit before. Wish there was a bit more on the description side when it came to the BE, but the story flows rather well. Overall, very nice work!
tusdine
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not much happens after most of the growth is described, but I loved it until then. Not enough good-quality "WOW" stories!
Mandy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wish i could give a higher rating that 5.
this is sooooooooooo up my alley...
being controlled and huge.
if you ever want to do an email rp or in a chat room hit me up.
karenjenk@hotmail.com
g-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Not bad at all! Love the ending. Maybe some sex next time?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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