A story of Jessica and Kyra. One day, one of them finds a strange bra with the power to increase her bust size. But how far will it go?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.25
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story! One of the better magic-bra stories I've seen on here for sure.
8008fan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Fun premise. Grammar needs some polishing and transitions were sometimes abrupt. I would have liked to have seen a bit more back and forth before going to "11".
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Very good. There were two minor spelling issues, but I didn't take any points off for it. I would've loved to see the competition aspect of this drawn out further; friendly at the beginning and then more acrimonious. Still, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Thanks for writing!
Anny Nonny Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this one. The competitive theme is really fun in a story like this. Hope to read more of your stories!
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