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The Overflowing Bra

Chrissie and the Muffin Top: Mara's Boudoir
With Chrissie out for the night with a hot date, Mara discovers that giving into temptation can do wonders for a woman's figure, though trying to stop when she's had too much can be more than she can handle.
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Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Good effort, but this hasn't been the best piece you wrote. It feels like you are trying to add on to a story that is more or less finished by having one of the already hugely endowed girls....grow huge. I dunno, I would have liked to see them talk one of their super skinny customers into getting as huge as they are or something, start with a blank slate. Still a enjoyable enough read though, nice work.

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