The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Adrian Burns
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I'm Back
The Bakers are visited by an old friend.

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 Graayface
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Your stories were some of the first I read and I still go back and reread them. I loved this story as much as your older ones. 
 Kowalski
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Old school!
 Gnarl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Been a long time! I hope you're back in the game, or at least add a couple new stories over the next year. This reminds me of your classics from characters to overall scenario. I don't know where you've been hiding, but, I'm glad to see you back!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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