The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

CuddleBeam and Vincent_Richter
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CuddleCow
Yuri between a farmer and a Cowgirl with an odd characteristic - she grows as the affection and attachment between them increases.

My first story (that I'll continue into bigger sizes). I hope you like it!
Average Scores:

NM
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great start, only disappointing its so short. hoping to see more of this in the future.

cman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It has a lot of potential! I hope you go big.

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's a good read. I'm a personal fan of anime style cow girls. I docked you on the BE mostly because there's such a disappointing amount of it in this first installment. I'll be happy to see part 2 show up.

anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A promising start.

Petite Sœur
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

This is a dream come true, thanks for doing a story with cute anime-style cowgirls! Looking forward to seeing Hirasawa boobies slowly grow until she becomes a walking milktank, and hopefully an immobile milk factory later on.

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