The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Chris Yohn
Wet T Shirt Contest
Brad needs money for college so Daniel helps him out- by giving him  breasts!! A local bar hosts a wet T-shirt contest where the winner gets a $500 dollar cash prize. Daniel has been playing the system ever since he inherited the flesh alteration kit! Now he can help his bro, Brad. The two first go hunting for the perfect breasts on campus. Then body swaps Brad onto an alternate woman's body. With a little help and fashion tips from his bi-curious companion, Vanessa, no one has to worry about going broke this semester!
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Ethereal Vision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoyed the story immensely. I like how well it is written, and I'd love to see what other sexual situations the boys turned into girls can get into with both genders.

Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Please write more stories like this one! I can hardly wait for another story about Dan/Danni , Brad/Daren and Vanessa's further adventures with the flesh kit.

An intriqued reader,

Chaos-Master

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