I wrote this story (by hand!) about 20 years ago. I then typed it and posted it online around 1996 but it has since become difficult to find.
Synopsis: Two girls compete for the attention of a guy by getting progressively larger implants.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
brianm
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I remember these very fondly and still have them on my PC, although hadn't looked at them for a while.
Thanks for the reminder!
So how about "Now, I Must Increase My Bust Even BIGGER!" :-)
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A nice start. This part could use a bit of proofreading too, but it doesn't have the major technical issues of the first part. Again, I would like to see more description in the story. Hopefully you will be inspired to write another part of this!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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