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The Overflowing Bra

Chrissie and the Muffin Top: Waist Not, Want Not
After a couple months at the Muffin Top, Chrissie has never been happier, especially since spending so much time at the bakery is doing wonderful things to her figure.  When someone offers to pay her to get as big as she can though, Chrissie may find herself expanding far beyond the limits of her comfort zone.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I have enjoyed all of stories. This one was as good as all of the others, but seemed to bog down a little in the middle of the story

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Wonderful! I loved every moment of it. I would love to see one more story in the series before calling it at an end. Maybe with the two girls accidentally giving a super charged eclair to one of the Muffin Tops more skinnier newcomers? I dunno, just a thought. Regardless, please keep writing!

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It was an Okay Read..Though not exactly in the Nature of this Site.

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