The conclusion of Overfilling Cups. Comes included with a slightly revised part 1 which contains more description, I hope. Will Lori return to normal? Will Dark explain the method to his madness? How many licks does it take to get to the Tootsie Roll center of a Tootsie Pop!? The world... is bound to know sooner or later. (NC = growth, not sex; mild AG and LG)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
RedGhost
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quite enjoyed it. Characters were interesting, plot device was mostly original and story kept a good pace while keeping the reader amused with what was going on with good detail. A few minor grammar mistakes, but nothing serious enough to throw your keyboard over. Please keep up the original work.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked it, I also liked how it ended and how the new girl was shortly introduced as a fun little quirk. Not gonna get super descriptive here but its short and to the point. The cat man becomes more likable here and Lori is a character torn between practicality and lust/pleasure.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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