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The Overflowing Bra

Ghost of Christmas
ghost_of_christmas@yahoo.com
Genie-ism
[BE] [PE] | 3 Page story | Fairly Straightforward | Story includes Penis and Breast expansion as before favouring [PE] over [BE] but has larger breasts  than. | LACTATION | There is hardly any story to this. It's mostly perversion | Not enough yuri | Again: includes a below average size female on around average size male | HTML included but NOT advised | Please enjoy | No cruelty |
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Ghostly
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Thanks for responding anyway.
I'm glad you at least read it all before responding.
I'm sad to hear your tastes in sexual content are different from mine.
I however can't write things outside my own comfort zone.
As you say the story is non existent ( A fact I actually wrote on the download details )
I'm sorry for the horrible grammar, truth is this story was mostly foreplay and I hardly checked the end result grammatically.
Though since you disliked the story anyway I guess it's of little relevance. Fixing the grammar wouldn't help you like it, that saddens me. I'm sorry to have wasted your time.
I hope to see something from you at some point in time.

Jobber
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Very poor. Sorry. The grammar is so terrible it's nearly unreadable, and fighting through that just gets to a terrible story where nothing happens and there are not even any interesting descriptions.

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