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A very story driven, EXCLUSIVELY [BE]story 6 Pages. | No CANNON sex scenes are in this BE story > but A non cannon one is included at the end. ( albeit it isn't a complete sequence. ) | Short big breasted girl included ( as it usual for me ) | FANTASY & DRAMA |
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.50
- BE: 1.50
- Characters: 1.50
- Technical: 1.50
deus
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
After five typos in the first paragraph, I just stopped reading. Please clean it up and resubmit it. I'm sure you spent a lot of time writing it, please spend some time reviewing it so we can enjoy it.
zzzzzzzz
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
cant read need other format
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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