A short story about a vacation in the mountains, a mysterious g-string, and a man's personal journey into womanhood and extremely large breasts.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.91
- BE: 4.73
- Characters: 4.64
- Technical: 4.45
Beachball boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
PLEASE! Write some more, you are Great!
aeroprime
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I liked it a lot. Could have been longer, though. So many more scenarios you could have explored. Like the bar could have been a strip club for example. :)
wanker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very good story! Looking forward to the next one. Would love to read something longer as well.
Thag13
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Excellent story. I hope to see more in the series.
notta realname
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best I've read in a long time, please keep writing.
Dee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great read! I really enjoyed it and would love to read more from you!
revealer
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
bier
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
another guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story! I can't wait to read whatever you do next.
A guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked the story a lot, please write more. If I had one suggestion, it would be to add a little more to the end. I love to here just a bit of what happens to the characters after the final transformation in stories like this, wanting more is a good thing though!
Ethereal Vision
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I thought this story was fun. I think you teased a bit at him being discovered by his friends a little, only to have him/her hook up with someone else. I would have liked to see the three of them get busy. But that's my opinion, it's your story.
I want to see more from you. I enjoyed this one. Keep writing.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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