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A thief climbs into the queen's palace to do a bit of the old plunder-and-loot, but finds herself becoming a bit more enamored with the royal wardrobe than she was expecting. Medieval fantasy bimbo/BE. Because why not?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
jd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A musician
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A very enjoyable story. Just the right length too. The BE description was minimal, but it leaves more to the imagination, which I liked.
Realtime
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent story. I have to agree with the other comments that it could use some more BE, but it doesn't need an overhaul to get this effect. A final overall description of her body at the end of the transformation could do the trick.
Topher
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short, yet very descriptive, and overall a nice quick read.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Hit all mt fav topics to read and while the BE seemed minimal I like the amount for this length of story. Thanks for writing.
Horseradish
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoyed the story, but thought the be was lacking.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good, although more of a transformation story than a BE one.
Mary
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I liked it quite a bit but then you hit upon a few of my favorite things: slow, gradual changes, plenty of clothing description, fantasy settings, and bimbo stories.
Basically, by themes, it checks all my favorite boxes - only makes me wish it was a bit longer and even more in depth!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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