The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kraken de Polar
Genie of the Beanie
Genie of the Beanie? That sounds ridiculous. Let me guess, a guy makes some wishes and they all get twisted?! Oldest story in the book!! Don't make me laugh! --A couple of friends have been given the chance to use some wishes to change their lives forever, but the genie has a few tricks up her sleeve!-- 

Warning -- TG!
Average Scores:

bc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

fantastic!

Gamer2113
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great story - would have liked to see a little more detail. Overall though a fun take on the traditional genie story.

etherealvision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed this story. I wish there were some more detail, but it was overall a very fun and sexy read.

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Definitely a super fun story.

Bobking11
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

simply amazing

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