The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
The Complete PDF Of Connie’s Weed (World of Altaerna, 2011)
Meek student Connie rediscovers an ancient power source. Immune to its powers but gifted with control of them, soon she’s in over her head, trying to keep her BFF Marge in check as the berry juice of old turns the feisty raven-hair into an ever-greedy buxom bimbo. And just as Connie thinks she’s getting off with a black eye, things *really* hit the fan ...
Eee-yup, that’s the all-in-one 200-pager PDF of my 2010 four-parter, semi-epic, fun and action romp from the world of Altaerna. Just a bit to tide you over until something truly new from lazy yours truly comes along. Doesn’t mean I’d not appreciate some comment or other if you haven’t done so before... :-)
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Gubrats
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Ah, you made me read most of it again by reposting!
All your stories are excellent, great characters, description, detail, lesbianisms, and even an engaging story o_0. Looking forward to seeing where its all going (and the fun that ensues!)

Cal
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Actually very, very well done. Doesn't get bogged down anywhere, nice, likable characters, lots of heated moments and emotion, and it has way more variety than you'd expect.

Merkava IV
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was a great story. I sat and read it in two sittings (stuck in Korea, not much else to do). Great Characters, great plot, well polished. An example for others to emulate.

ktc1221
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I read this when you first released them, and was excited each time I would check the site to find the next addition. Fantastic story and I hope to see more from you :-).

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