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The Complete "Bra". Awaking to find herself alone and chained in a warehouse, Jenna is forced to watch the counter clicking away her doom, her only company a mysterious video feed.
Elsewhere, bright and determined Eva is suffering her own nightmare. Her captor wants to play a game, and he's brought her friends along for the ride. She'll have one hour to find out who their captor is, what the game-master wants from them, and how it's all connected. If she can't, it's game over for all of them.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.80
Talyene
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Whoever edits and pueibshls these articles really knows what they're doing.
tdean
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it, blew my mind at the end. thumbs up
mmalle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just like the real "saw", the plot shocked me to the core.
Excellent writing, excellent story progression, even though I am not absolutely happy with the ending.
You are very talented at storytelling, and I'm eager to read more from you!
5 *****
godofwar5000
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written, great BE scenes, thoroughly enjoyed it. Hope to see more from ya!
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That was very well written. Despite it being so close to how the actual movie went, I still didn't expect that.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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