This is my first contribution. I didn't think I could write something of my own, so instead I versified something I had read awhile ago. I hope what I have done makes it make more sense. All credit goes to Yashmen Halfcount!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
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Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I know it sounds strange, but I miss Yashmen. She was terribly eccentric and strange, but she was actually trying to write 'art', unlike most of the tripe we see around here.
Kudos, Tenant, you have executed a superb reconstruction of her work. Yes, you succeeded in teasing the story into a much easier narrative to digest.
If I didn't think it was impossible, I would think that your collaboration was really the product of a younger, more perverted William Gibson. Good job.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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