Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.65
- BE: 1.85
- Characters: 1.50
- Technical: 1.04
crnn
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
was this written by an 8 year old?
Eddie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Horribly misspelled crap.
Shyanne
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The story is a total rip off of a BBI comic and the spelling is atrocious!
Dreginy
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
My god.
The grammar and spelling in this was so bad I found myself editing the story itself just to enjoy it more.
At least the breasts grow to a decent size.
Z
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
When you submit something, it's supposed to be something engrossing or enjoyable. Having to puzzle out mass typos and confused meanings dumps the experience in the crapper. The story here seems to be something whipped up in 5 minutes and submitted without using even a basic word processor (.txt file, most likely notepad) and with no care for the work. A simple proofreading would have shown it to be unacceptable even on something like an addventure post.
tsokei
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Very short, but nice scene- sadly almost unreadable due to prolific misspellings and typos.
fantasy man
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Megamelonomaniac
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
It was fun trying to work out what the author was tring to say!
BB47
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Not bad if you like stories written by a drunk 13 year old on his cell phone.
Bed Benders Inc
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
You stole my story dude, almost word for word, and somehow managed to spell everything terribly.
BE_Guy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Illiteracy at its finest. Poor in every conceivable way
disapprove
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Could not even try to read it...
Nut
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Soyukaze
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
What is your native language? Clearly, it is not English.
derp
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Worst...
Spelling...
EVER!!!
bigreader
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Crap
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
28 is less than zero
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Are you fucking kidding me?
Kyu
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
I am horrible, but I can't help but read this story in Swarzenegger's voice.
Anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Wasn't too bad. Again just needed a spell check and some length to it. However I am curious to see what happens next.
Twe
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Any spellchecker, even Word's would catch 90% of the errors, and suggest fixes that would improve it... Half a notch above unreadable...
I Thought My Spelling Was Bad
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
blerg
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
at least run some spellchecker trough it
Penis_Butter
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Very short, very poorly written. No redeeming qualities whatsoever.
Goodgollymismolly
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Well, it was a good idea for a story. But Holly Cracker Jack On A Piece Of Toast!!! That was the most weird mix of Englis and German I have ever seen!!!!!!!!
Get yourself a decent dictionary, and start reading books in English!!!!
banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
the story its self is a good idea, and about it! Spelling is bad, dose not say why or how, but i was willing to wait, an see just how big she would get.:-)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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