The Overflowing Bra

did you write this in 1 minute

Are you five? You write stories like fucking child. I kept thinking this story came from a really perverted kid in elementary school.

@peterBE, I don't comment a lot on these stories but i do tend to agree with a lot of opinions set forth here. This site is in english format, and i don't believe asking for a bit of effort to be put in to get your story to a lvl where your not trying to piece together whats going on is "high standards". I can understand the story just fine....but this was not translated well, or probably looked at in any way after it thrown though a translator. 
  
(To the author) A story with no, or in this case very little effort to reach the audience it was targeted at will never be received well. no matter how great the idea is if you cant reach your audience they will pretty much sit there and go...huh? Omnitrixie is right in every way, idea is good but you need to take more than a passing glance at a story before you post it. 

Interesting idea, I like the technical mishap type of trigger.  The remotes mix-up was neat too.  The misspellings and grammar problems got in the way though.  

You guys need to get over yourselves.  It seems pretty obvious English isn't the author's first language.  Despite that, he wrote and shared a pretty damn original story that I enjoyed a lot.  If you really couldn't make heads or tails of it, you need more help than he does.  If you keep slaying the people who write and post simply because their English skills aren't up to your high standards, they aren't going to come here anymore.  What have YOU posted recently?

concept could be okay, but the story was unreadable

This is just totally awful in every way. I'm sorry.

The author clearly did not proof-read this story, use spell-check or grammar-check, or give a damn whether the story was readable.

Oh My God what is this ?, basic idee nähh i don't really know,sorry but make it next time a bit more !!!( Better to reading )!!! 

OmniTrixie said it well. I had no idea what I was reading from the start. A 2 in BE because from the little I did read it was actually in the story, which is good considering the site your posting this too. Do trolls really exist for a fetish site like this one? If they do I'd question how or why they found it in the first place...

I agree with OmniTrixie. The basic idea has merit, but this story is nearly unreadable in its current format.

You need a writing style guide, less faith in your spellchecker, the willingness to double-check your material before you post it, and an editor.  Possibly even in that order.
There's a kernel of an idea in there, but the rendering needs serious help.