The Overflowing Bra

Extremely enjoyable story.  I would love to see more work by you in this same vein!
Some explanation of my ratings:
BE description was a bit terse, considering the amount of description some stories here have.  However, I felt that it fit the story nicely without becoming some kind of gravity well of description.
The characters: your female lead deserves nearly 5 for characterization here, but your male lead is a bit low-dimensional.  Good work on the former, not as impressive on the latter.

It was a very original concept and had many new ideas that I've never previously encountered. That's what counts the most imo - originality. I also liked the "open" ending which provides material for other authors and the overall "happy" feeling throughout the story.

I really like this type of story Clean and inviting to the BE character. The plot was first rate. Like other said too quick of an ending. 

The story was quite good, and as others said, finally a good work on the site!
Maybe next time try to leave more time (and text) after the full transformation. In this ways it's too short: getting green, growing, growing lasrger, whoa, then everybody leaves in peace and happiness. Its good, better, then better, then suddenly ends. 
Otherwise, liked it. 

What a nice break from the recent crap-fest.

Certainly one of the better new stories we've gotten around here lately. I've always thought this sort of thing would make a good story. Sort of reminded me about a book I read as a kid called Top-Secret.
Anyways I think it could have used a bit more BE and have it be more detailed. I'd also like the echo what other have said about breaking up the text a bit. 
Overall I liked how this had some actual story to it and I'm really hoping you write some more stuff. Too many new authors write one good story and disappear. 

I think I might have a plant girl fetish now.... Walls of text aside it was a good read.

I really wanted to get into the story, but I had a hard time getting past the gigantic walls of text.  Break up your paragraphs, a lot.  Don't forget that you need a new paragraph every time the speaker changes.  I liked what I could muddle out, but you need to let all of your ideas have their own space; right now, it's just too crowded.
Also, I couldn't make much out, but I don't think that there was a lot of description of the sex, just a lot of fading to black.  Describe the sex!