The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Vicky & Victoria, Part 2
With the coming of a new day, Vicky begins to explore as her thirst to know more about Victoria grows.  The power of the spring behind the house seems to be growing, and before long, Vicky herself is too.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This is a really good story and I read both part one and two in one go. The only things that I found a bit odd were the expansion sequence. Not sure if it's in part one or two or maybe both, but the expansion sequence, based on the description and sequence length gave me the a bit of false illusion that things expanded to far bigger proportions than what see later described what see saw in the mirror, hinted what cup size or another way she described her new curves. Nevertheless I enjoyed reading it, even tho it felt a bit weird that she wasn't as big as I imagined she would be.

BE Vampire
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely amazing!

To echo some of the other comments, the only thing I can even begin to criticize about this story (and it is hardly a criticism) is that the wait for the next chapter is going to be unbearable!

Thank you so very very much for your work!

Please please keep it up... I know I will!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's gonna be a a long and painful wait until part 3 comes out. Until it does, I will continue loving your work

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Aside from the fact that the story drags in places (did you add more detail to a complete story?), the plot and descriptions cover a fine story. If you have a shorter version of part 2, I strongly recommend that you post it as well! And I agree with the sentiments from the other reviewers: this story is fresh air (mixed with a glut of asides an redundancies). Compared to the par of 2011, you win.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I wish it didn't take so long to write, but I don't want to rush quality. There have been a lot of reposted or bad content this year, and your stuff is top shelf.

Keep doing what you're doing.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I have to completely agree with El Burro. The quality of some of the stories the past few months have been lacking. Not all, but a fair majority. In fact, some are downright plagerism. This is a breath of fresh air and quite an enticing one at that. You're going to make me into a chubby chaser at this rate sir.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent. Only comments: It took 4 months for the sequel to come out... and it might just be my computer but the font came out very notepad-ish.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Holy fleurking schnit! That was awsome!

El Burro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

YES! MOAR! FOR GODS SAKE MORE!! Best damn thing to be posted here in AGES!

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