The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fahzbehn
fahzbehn@yahoo.com
Candy Bimbo
My first free post in a while.  A very short story about another magical costume.  Jennifer is told that the costume allows a person to have their fondest desires to become reality, but whose?
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 Dawn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
That was all I needed to know about the characters.  Short and sweet.
 banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
it,s a really good short story.why stop with only two feet wide breast? This is a BE story, right?
 Corvus Vulpini
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Not bad at all
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