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Tamara agrees to do a little work volunteering...how hard can it be, right? She'll be the cat's meow for sure!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.25
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.25
Darkfall
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Love the story, hope more is on the way!
JT
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Darkheart
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I wasn't able to keep reading it, because some of the underlying elements in the story really bothered me. While well written (some errors here or there, but for once my brain didn't bleed trying to understand what the author was trying to say), I was disturbed by the fact she was reduced to the mentality of a kitten then put in some very adult situations. Submissiveness doesn't bother me, but what was done to her mentally just felt off. The punishment didn't fit the crime in my eyes.
Also quite frankly I would've come up with something else for the main character getting in trouble, the reason given just seemed very weak.
JD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Psy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked this one, just the thought of "Catgirl 101" is epic
Void
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Don't usually rate stuff, but felt the need to counteract the first person, who clearly didn't read the story.
It's quite good, I really like the submissive elements and the writing itself is beyond solid. A couple grammar errors here and there, mostly really small things like the distinction between their/there being off a couple of times, but nothing that really impeded my understanding or enjoyment.
I would say that you could use some more work on your description of the BE and the breasts themselves. More description so that the reader can get a feel for their size and shape.
Still, I enjoyed it all over and look forward to more stuff from you.
Namazuros
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Uh...did you read the actual story? :/ there is breast expansion at multiple points.
And check it out, marking my own story down to tell you that, wooo~
bemountains
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Transforming to cat? What is the BE basic here?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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