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The Overflowing Bra

Alias_the_Archangel
jimmy.alger@gmail.com
Mary's Pills
Mistress Mary has gets some great results from an experimental drug, and wants to share the fun.
Average Scores:
 IronHammer
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Not bad for a short story.  Not to beggar the term, but this could have been expanded out into a much longer tale, it has all the possibilities of psycho-sexual drama.
 Yossarian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Excellent! Nice and short.
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