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The Overflowing Bra

DDDave
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A Day In The Life (translated to Brazilian Portuguese)
A estudante inglesa Abigail vai até o médico para um check-up.
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I liked, the writing was perfect, and is really a lot more enjoyable in native language. Just the lack of an proper ending or BE make it a 4-stars.
 Loomthemad
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Yes Why?
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
This seems like a cheap way to repost a story
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
why?
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