The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Volt Namazuros
Namazuros@gmail.com
Full Moooooooooooon
A cheerleader learns that bullying the wrong girl can have udderly awful consequences.
Average Scores:

JT
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I loved it!

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

This has the potential to be a great story, but you have to remember that this site is for breast expansion, primarily.

Blakgers
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very nice, I agree with the person aove me though, a bit more expansion and it would have been perfect. :)

SilentReader
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Liked it, can't really complain, It COULD have had more expansion and COULD have been a bit longer but that's me just being spoiled by large stories.

I feel like checking out your other stuff now....

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