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Parents may know the secret of why their daughter's breasts grow larger every summer, but they aren't telling.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Superb. One of the best, if not _the_best, stories I've read here. It certainly deserves an award!
Dinner
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I shouldn't be so surprised to see water tricks, but they're so rare on TOB, let alone so rarely done well! Water's one of my favorites, and honestly where I got my vampiric inspiration for "Thorns of a Rose." The characters' reactions are perfectly done. Everything is perfect, except for a plethora of distracting run-ons. I really loved this.
ThreePointOneFour
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A true classic of BE writing. The mechanism of breast growth in the story is unusual and quite interesting. I would hope to see other stories similar to this in the future.
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great and memorable BE story. I wish the author would get around to writing a sequel!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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