The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kraken de Polar
Strong Mind, Weak Heart
dr. Steven Rogers wakes up to find himself being interrogated about the events surrounding the hospitalization of his girlfriend. Was he to blame for the tragic events, or was the science simply beyond his comprehension. 

This is the first one I have put together in a while. Just a BE story chocked full of science. Don't worry about any jargon that sneaks it way into the story, just enjoy it for what it is folks!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story overall. A little more description during the BE moments and a little more depth for the characters would have helped. Still, good job.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3


Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

If I had a top-10 list for this site, this story would definitely make it on there. Well done, and we're all looking forward to more!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

some very not important errors. liked the story in its entirety and just wish the BE was better described. Overall nice writing style and great work with the transitioning.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: