A very short story with Breast Implants. In this letter to my wife I go through the history and some of the details or her miraculous expansion using saline expanders!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.86
- BE: 4.43
- Characters: 3.57
- Technical: 4.29
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Always like BE due to implants. A few grammatical errors but otherwise the writing was fine. My only issue was that it was too short! More please! :)
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I usually like your stories and this one was no exception. I really enjoyed it. I gave you a 4 on Characters since there wasn't much description of them (although I'm not sure that it's required in this case). I gave you a 4 on Technical because there are a few your're/your mistakes. Please keep writing!
Barkspawn
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Not as good as your other stories.
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
If you're like me, you come here not just to read about BE, but to read about Erotic BE. This wasn't really erotic to me. It was a nice sentiment. But for some reason it reads like a BE Hallmarks card.
Jared
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
More a character piece than anything else. Just didn't do much for me.
outroducin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
GREAT DESCRIPTIONS...loved it!!
Breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great stuff.
The more from you the better. :)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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