fkoch7@yahoo.de
Im sorry for my last story so many peoples are angry with it so i hope this is better than my first -.-
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.75
- BE: 1.75
- Characters: 1.63
- Technical: 1.38
Fucktard
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Clarissa
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please, put down the German-->English dictionary.
Megamelonomaniac
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Just how big is a coffee plate?
zyankali
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
At this rate, you'll have yourself a good short story in a few months.
fox_drifter
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I don't think everyone directly hates the content of your short stories, it's just that they are technically illegible (the words don't make sense at worst and are very awkward at best).
Why not write in German? That seems like your native tongue from the email listed, and you'd probably get a much more positive responce. It's very difficult to enjoy a story that has such strange sentence structure and weird choices such as the all-capitalized names. When it's more linguistic puzzle than story, it's a tough sell.
dude
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
okay dude you need to work on you sentence structure and grammar, like big time, i had no idea what you where talking about at all
Erazor
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Better than last but why do you write Milka and Verena always with CAPS?
littleone
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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