The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Phoenix
landedphoenix@yahoo.com
Experiment (+ Picture)
Toshiko Graystone is an average college student, tight on cash. So when she sees an ad offering $5,000 for human test trials of a new pharmaceutical, she signs up. The side effects are a bit more than she bargained for, however, and she quickly finds herself growing in some new--and terrifying--places.

A relatively short story featuring multiple breast growth, ass growth, an udder, and one very scared college student who can't stop growing.

Picture included: if you decide to read, do yourself a favor and don't look at the picture until the story is over. If you dig this kind of stuff. :-) Let me know what you think, and feel free to write: landedphoenix@yahoo.com
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esalerugs promo code
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Unbelievable. Class..!!

DS
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Victimized women and no sex. Blah.

BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good writing, engaging story, but our poor little protagonist is unhappy with her changes, which makes me unhappy with her changes. There's no enjoyment anywhere to be found. Perhaps it's just me, but I like it when 'she' likes it, not when she hates it.

emankcin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Really good tale so far... hope you get around to finishing it. Btw, you haven`t finished Double which is a real shame `cos it`s excellent and I hope you will someday:)

wow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Brilliant! Loved it can't, wait for more...

Requiem
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really good, can't wait for the sequel!

5678
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Eagerly awaiting the sequel

Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great! Please tell us more, wonderful story.

Vlad
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good. Eagerly awaiting more.

1234
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Keep going!

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