Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.67
Oppai King
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well done. Just wished the expansion parts could've kept going.
banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
i like this story vary much. It has everything an inflation story needs.I myself would go a little farther,like when she was to haevy to move off his cock.She might have ended up a dozen or more babys.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The best stories I have read in months. Good pace and built up the anticipation very nicely. Free of typos too.
The belly inflation was much appreciated too although I wished it progressed a little more slowly and there was more description of the multiple pregnancies.
Keep up the good work!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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