The first story about a guy and his experience on a website recommendation.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.83
- BE: 2.17
- Characters: 2.83
- Technical: 2.83
fox_drifter
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not my cup of tea, but you deserve more real reviews to offset 'format' comments and the like (the format is a zipped .doc, by the by, for any concerned). This IS a breast expansion archive, so I tend to agree that a little more of that would be a plus, but I realize TG involves some kind of growing breasts by necessity, even if they're not huge. It's a decent fetish story if you're into TG.
shayna_k
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Useless in the current format. Try using a standard format like a plain .doc, .txt or .html so that your file can be seen.
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
More of a TG story than a BE one but I`d be interested to see it continued. Maybe in the next one there could be just a bit more focus on BE and more of a glimpse into how the change affects her life. Great start though, keep going!
cynicalviking
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
very good start, I'm really looking forward to seeing where else you are going with the story. A little more detail on the transformation would have been my choice, but that's more of a style thing. A couple errors, but easily overlooked as it is a genuinely enjoyable story.
Daelon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I personally enjoyed the story. The transformation could have used some more description, but otherwise it was a decent first submission.
mbnfu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
it seems like your posting is in the wrong place
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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