Gina's breasts have doubled in size and they show no sign of slowing. A month later she has to come to terms with her new found body and its complications.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.67
- BE: 2.67
- Characters: 2.33
- Technical: 2.67
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Semall
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
AS good as the first and as quick off the bat
hondjemax
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
PDF, third best after .txt and HTML.
Glad to see it's not .doc. It's proprietary formats that should be banned.
FormatGuy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Didn't care for the format, or the telling, and didn't like the BE. Oh and PDF? Really? Now now, use something that is standard, like RTF, DOC, TXT, HTML, etc...
sadir
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
nice story overall would like not to have such big gaps at some points but to each there own also merkitty dont rate a story simply because of its format
Merkitty
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Anything but PDF for the sake of all that is holy, don't you realize that PDFs are a bane to most existences when it comes to viruses?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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