Gina's life is going through some changes. Hopefully bigger breasts will just be the start of an incredible journey.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 3.92
- Technical: 4.08
Tremall
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
RandomX
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great stuff but ended so quickly! I love how well you write and hope you stretch this into a full sized story!
Semall
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
"Modest" when compared to something much larger perhaps?
When will there be more? This is great, if a little slow on the expansion front, but focused on her breasts the whole time
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I truly liked the story, but it ended pretty abruptly. I look forward to later Chs.
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great stuff! Realistic, and very nice story. LOVE to see the detail and length involved in genuine real-world growth, rather than overnight explosion. Can't wait for the next chapters! Thanks a lot.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
That was a pretty good read, though a bit short. Hopefully there will be more to come from this story.
Also I don't think the writer was implying that they though D-cups were modest. That's why the word was in quotation marks in the story.
FlashBigger
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A great, very promising start! Can't wait to read more.
Guy Incognito
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Grammer needed to be cleaned up, but this definitely has a lot of potential...and yeah, a D-cup is pretty big (obviously not for us :D)
Aitchbee
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
You described a D-cup as "modest"? In what imaginary universe?
him
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Its the beginning of something hopefully there is going to be more
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really good writing skills, I just wish the story had gone on a little longer and included a little more BE.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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