happyguyprime@yahoo.com
Happyguy says: This one is inflation, and it's a little more experimental; I was playing with the Gothic/Romance novel sort of... wait, that's just bullshit. Maybe it's just a bad story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Boobarian
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Not enough BE. Maybe there could have been an episode before she came downstairs? Maybe another while he was still explaining things to her? Culminating with the BE scene at the end. Not a really bad story, just not enough of what I would like to BE included.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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