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The Overflowing Bra

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Grandma Annie's Sea Journal (Illustrated)
A Sequel to "The Tale of Our Isle."  Here is the continuing story of William and Arianna, including their rescue from their Isle. (Very long) Includes drawings from Grandpa Bill's long-lost sketchbook.
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Naglafar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stories.

Awesome pictures.
I love Annie :)

GNC Railway
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, what a great story. The drawings are just a bonus to a very wonderful Victorian tale of wonderful sex along with interesting character development. If you have already read the 1st story, 'the Tale of our Isle' this story does back track a little and you feel like you have covered some of this tale before, however overall it is a wonderful story.

I think of this story as one of the classic tales of romance along with some BE and great descriptive couplings. How I wish I could habe been the hero and mated with the beautiful Annie. I am really looking forward to reading the next installment of this story.

I hope that it continues after the 3rd tale that has been published.

Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another superb piece. You are clearly an exceedingly capable writer. I look forward to your next effort. It would be fun to hear your elegant prose applied to a contemporary story.

pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stories.

Awesome pictures.

This series is the best thing to happen this site in a long time.

fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

loved the prose and the artwork. top notch! we dont deserve this quality! in short.....WELL DONE!

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I've become a big fan since reading the first installment. Excellent descriptions. Please do more!

Anonamoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great continuation of the series. Love to see more

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