A tweaked and edited version of the rewrite of the Mowermandave story Get Closer. Two women are still taught a lesson by a jilted wizard.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I found this story to be pleasant, but none of the characters were likeable. Also just a matter of taste, but they didn't quite get big enough.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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