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The Overflowing Bra

Dreginy
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Ciara's Crazy B.E! (Re-edit)
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 A Nony Mouse
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
The concept was good but it was all too rushed. There was not enough story involving all the smaller details. I think you have good potential but you need to take your time. 
 Alex Kiss
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Grammar FAIL. Never, ever, ever, ever, ever, nerver, nervoo, nervero, nerverinero... I digress.. 2 is not a replacement for not knowing when to use two, too or to.
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