The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

naughtychaswick
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The Expanding MicroBe Collection, 2nd Edition
A collection of BE microfiction.  15 pages of tiny stories and short stories.  Cursed genies, fun females, science experiments gone awry and more.  Something for everyone!
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namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I liked this quite a bit, you get what you signed up for as a reader, and you can fill in the rest with the imagination. I see this as a valid format, well done.

Fake-Name
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Technically interesting, fails completely to accomplish anything.

Spend the time to do full stories. These just fall far too short of actually capturing one's interest.

Syth Dracous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Zany, Rapid and Oddball. The final one will leave you either dazed and confuzed or smiling not sure how to call this one but I'll say worth the read.

Oxtail
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

An interesting exercise, but it made me angry! Some of those need to be full stories!

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