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Monica receives a mysterious bra in the mail which causes an unexpected problem. Luckily, her son Josh is there to help.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.17
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 4.83
Kevo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is my favorite story of all time! Absolutely amazing!
Someguy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good stuff, you definitely have the right ideas. I little longer next time though
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, Could have gone a little more detail into the BE but good overall
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good job. It could've been longer, but it was a decent read. I'd like to see more stuff from you.
Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Don't let other ppl that don't enjoy incest to downrate your stories. I thought it was great! Keep up the great work, and continue to write what you love to write.
wouldn't you like to know
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This was a well written story but the whole insest (sp) is creepy you should have done the sone as someone else.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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