The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

RobClassact
Super Size Me
A 1000 word quickie about a special girl with an unusual reaction to fast food.
Average Scores:
 Mrmanandu
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I loved the descriptions of the growth. Characters is the only let down but its 1000 words so it'd be hard to do it!
 amberdawn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Very hot, thank you.
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Nice!
Very good, for a shorty
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Good grammar, nice story keep it up!
 Dargo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Amazing story, really. I liked everything about it.
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