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The Overflowing Bra

Annie's Ponderous Endowments, Part II
Already enormous, and with week left to fill before her beloved returns home, Annie decides that too much is never enough.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I had a little trouble keeping her overall size straight- a little more description of her dimensions would have been helpful aside from "she ate and got bigger." I still like where this is going and am wondering where the other two parts are going to lead.

Good work.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good THX i like this kind of storys!
pls part 3!!!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Hope we see more of this! Big fan of weight gain, especially into the extreme sizes. It's a straight-forward fetish story and doesn't beat around the bush, which I can appreciate.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Excellent stuff, I love this type of and source of inflation, from food that makes for really big growth esp boobs. Keep 'em growing (both ladies, perhaps that was the doorbell here?!?)

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Super fun story. Would be nice to have more "sex".

elvis ineruptus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

More of a weight gain story then a BE story. However, I read therm too and it is a pretty good example of both types.

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