The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

New technology it keeping people safer, and bigger, in a warzone, this is my first comment please
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

not so much

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

anyone that complains about .docx fails. it's the new ms word format and you can patch your current version of ms office free (off the MS site itself). Or dl the ms office 2010 beta for free.

(Rating all 5s to at least try to offset some of those all 1s)

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Tickled my tastes but was lacking in length and description.

My penis is bigger than yours because I'm awesome.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

It's Docx man. Nobody can read that.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

.docx ... boo ... please export to something readable.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

good, too short. when is part two coming?

Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Too short for my tastes, stuff just happens "too fast"
Also don't like .docx. Please export in formats everybody can read without a problem. Plaintext is simply the best, most of the time you don't need fancy formatting anyway (at least nothing a blank line or tab can't fix)

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

.docx is the new MS Word format.

Pretty mediocre store overall.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

unreadable .docx format (XML of some type?)

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