The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kaleb
Orgasm Juice
Average Scores:

Crash
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

While the characters were well described, I can't say I found them likeable. I doubt they were intended to be liked was the intent.

Boobmonkey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I loved this, and I like the control she took of the process. More BE focus would have been nice, but overall excellent.

pappasmurf
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

very scientific snd captivating it made me want to read more

Viddaric
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I've noticed that a lot of people are in disagreement about the ending. Personally, I like godlike ascension stories. Props to you for this one.

buddyu
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

i love stories like this. i would like to read more of your work.

Dissapointed
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It was pretty good towards the beginning. Could have been more MPG in there though. But the main problem is when she went megalomaniac goddess. It seemed to have taken a cue from Akira and all I could think about was some giant mechanical goopy monster baby and some little guy on a red motorcycle screaming her name.

Ending ruined it.

Q-BE
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

As stated above, you do one thing particularly (GTS goddesses) but damn, if I wasn't jazzed by the science of it all. Somehow, I believed this more than the Annie story. Anyway, it got out of hand rather quickly, but I think the swiftness of it was welcome. The male penis growth was also enjoyable...not enough of mpg in BE stories, in my humble opinion. :)

As I said in Annie's Ascension, you have a bright future indeed.

One last thing: add more breast expansion--it's kind of the reason for the stories on this site, isn't it? ;)

anananananon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Commenting on this and the other story you posted:

A welcome change from the stories where the woman gets dumber
as her chest gets bigger.
(I don't see how THAT would be appealing.)

I'd like to see an SFBE story where the IQ and bra size are linked.
An experiment has the effect of increasing both.
(But without the goddesshood.)

Thanks again!

thestupender
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

lol wat at the ending

Roid Abuser
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

It was well-written, but the nice girl turning into a meglomaniac godess is overdone.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

You do one thing in your stories, but you do it very, very well.

frank
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

well done im not normally into GTS stories but this took the cake.

G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

One of the better GTS stories I've read here. Like the characters in the beginning, but then the story sped up a lil quick. Still a very good story.

Paul Gerard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This really rocked. Well done!

Professor Grow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved it! Everything a story should be.

idontknow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it, keep them coming! (formatting in this one is MUCH MUCH MUCH better!)

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