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The Overflowing Bra

Big Kahuna
Wonder Woman vs. Doctor Tits: Part One
What happens when the world's mightiest superheroine meets the world's greatest plastic surgeon?  An epic battle of ample proportions, is all.
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The War Dog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Nice story line, a very good plot. Can't Wait for Part 2

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good, very well written, terrific plot idea. This was a great story, looking forward to the next episode and tremendous growth.

Captain Nice
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, this is a very well written, carefully crafted story. I was very surprised because, as Blamandude said, most superhero or fanfic BE stories are crap but this was very good. It's not going to win awards from guys who just want to get off, but for those of us who like a good, complex story it's just about perfect. I hope you can do as well with the sequel.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Most superhero stories I have read have been pretty crappy. Out of character heroes and stupid situations. But this story was great, it really feels believable, your writing style is very good.

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