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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 10 - Accidental Ascension (World of Altaerna, 1200)
The shire of Ebron is supposed to be just another stop along the road for Yrba the Darkskin witch and Mirca, her Amazonian lover/aide/pupil. Much to their surprise, the curvy blonde with the dominating physique ends up on the deserted throne of the goddess-queen, and it’s not just her ego that slowly inflates under the constant adoration and feeding at the hands of her newly gained dozens of servants. Can Yrba even hope to compete for Mirca’s affection? (Pt. 10 of 12, previous parts included)
Average Scores:

Pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Love your work!

Your BE stories are not just about mere prurient eroticism, although I find them plenty arousing. 8D

I love the character development & the plot twists.

This the most intriguing series I've come across.

Please keep 'em coming.

konser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I would like that Yrba understands that Micra always wants bigger lol

AnonFool
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Surprisingly well written and a very nice balance of eroticism with plot and character development.

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really like where you're taking this story! I just lost it everytime Cawron and the maids made Mirca angry. Hilarious!

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Unfortunately, can't give all 5s to this story, because of what Mirca did in the end. I can only hope she realizes what she did and tries to fix her friendship. Losing a friend never ends well.

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