What happens when a young woman prays for larger breasts?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 3.57
- Characters: 4.14
- Technical: 4.57
44III
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I liked it because of the irony.
Oldkid
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like the idea quite a bit and like the brief story you wrote for it. However, it is brief and somewhat less satisfying as a result.
Agent Dee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very nice little twist of her getting bigger boobs each time she woke up, so i guess she should have worded her 'prayer' better.
Siedler
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The only thing I didn't like about it was that it was so short!
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A fun and well written short! I deffinatetly hope to see you do another soon. I would agree however that slowing things down for description now and then would help us get to know the character and to apreciate the events even more.
Red
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good! Liked it, hope the second chapter soon. A little more description? Nice emphasis on the weight of her breasts.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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