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Bethany enacts the next part of her plan to get revenge of Melanie, which strangely involves Ryu and the girls in her gym class.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
Karuna
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
always grateful, and this was one of those days.a0 When we arrvied at the Abernethy Center to shoot Nathan & Bethany's wedding it had been raining all morning.a0 Despite the rain Bethany was ready to go out and have
sheetswa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cant wait for the next chapter! Excellent so far.
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the fact that Bethany's mom is showing some moral character (she won't do Ryu if Bethany is doing him) but I am intrigued by her breastfeeding bit. I do hope that Bethany gets some action in the near future - from several sources. She is the only one in the story who has not had sex, and I think she deserves it more than the revenge she's wreaking.
btc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love the story...Hangin for the outcome ! Thanks for posting!
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