Set in 2010 physics revolutionizes travel with a new form of transportation, known as jumping. Jumping isn't perfect and is responsible for weird, "Jump Dreams" . Sarah a college physics grad student finds her own research is being used against her and yields in some expansive results.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.00
VonAether
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A number of spelling errors, but I liked the concept and general presentation. Could have gone on longer... longer description of Sarah's time in captivity, expand on what happened after her pregnancy, and maybe some investigation as to whether or not the whole thing really happened or was just a jump dream. All in all, enjoyable.
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I don't get why you bothered setting up the idea of "Jump Dreams" if the net effect wasn't any different than a normal dream. There were also a number of spelling and grammatical errors which a spell check program can't catch.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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